Saturday, 23 May 2015

Raisha OS - Hamari Adhuri Kahani

sam is on the stage and people are waiting to hear something about his book from him. Finally he speaks
Sam : Main koi professional writer nahi hu. writer to na jane kahan kahan se shbdo ka bhandar me se moti jaise shbd nikal kr ek anokhe sansar ki rachna krte hai. main wo to bilkul nhi hu aur jo ye soch rhe hai k ek ex police officers ki zindagi me aye sbse muskil cases k bare me iss kitab me jikr hoga aur ye btane ki koshish ki gyi hogi k wo apne duty k dino me kitna bahadur aur imandar tha to ye bilkul bi nahi hai. Han ye kahani meri hai meri zindagi ka hissa hai pr ye kahani us ziddi aur hare huye insan ki hai jise apni har ka ehsas bi kuch mahino pehle hua jo sari zindagi ye sochta rha k uss  jaisa pyar koi kar hi nahi skta aur pyar me uss se zyda dard syad hi kisi ko mila hoga. apne pyar pe bahut ghamand tha. jo kuch mahino pehle tuta.
Flashback
some month before
rat ka whqt hai aur sam apne room me hai. arkashi hall me hai
Sakshi : arjun tumhe jalne ki smell nahi aa rahi ?
Arjun : iss umer me bi mere good looks dekh kr tumhe jalan ho rahi hai
Sakshi : shut up arjun
Arjun realise k sch me jalne ki smell aa rhi hai
Arjun : keh to tum thik rahi ho. chalo dekhte hai.
dono ghr check karne lgte hai. sam k room k pas smell badh jati hai. arjun sam k room ka door open karta hai arjun aur sakshi agle hi pal sam k room me. sam k hath me kuch papers aur pictures hai jinhe wo ek ek karke jala rha hai. sam k face pr na hi gussa hai na kisi nafrat k namo nishan. uske face pe ek ajeeb si shanti hai. arkshi ko apne room me dekh k
Sam : aram se. tum dono to aise bhag k aye ho jaise main suicide kr rha hu
Arjun : shut up sam. hum jante hai tu itna kamjor nahi hai. pr achanak ye sb karne ki kya zarurat pad gyi. tu to kehta tha ye tere pyr ki nishaniyan hai, aj inhe hi mita rha hai?
Sam faintly smile : ye mere pyr ki nahi uss pyr pe ghamand ki nishaniyan hai. aur jahan ghamand hota hai na wahan pyar to hota hi nahi hai. sari zindagi ye soch kr nikal di k mujh jaisa pyar koi kr hi nahi skta uss se. usne mujhe kho kr apni zindagi ki sbse kimati cheez khoi hai. roz sochta tha k ek baar uss se milu aur use ye guilt karwau k usne meri zindagi kharab kr di…..maine use chaha…aur wo nhi mili to kisi aur ko uski jagah nhi di…..pr aj pta chala usne mujhe nahi maine use khoya tha, aur jis pyar pe mujhe itna ghamand hai wo pyar to uske pyar k aage kuch bi nahi hai
Sakshi : sam sch sch btao kya hua hai ab mujhe darr lag raha hai.
Sam : itne se hi darr gyi. Aj main uss se mila
Sakshi : kis se?
Sam : Aisha se
Arkshi shockingly : what? wo yahan pune me ?
Sam : han. wo market k dusri taraf coffee house hai na wahan weekly basic pe account dekhti hai.
Arjun : tune to coffee pini kb ki chod di to fir coffee shop pe kaise jana hua?
Sam : pta nahi syad hamara milna likha tha so coffee pine chala gya
In evening
Sam coffee shop me enter hota hai aur counter pe jake order deta hai
Sam : one hot coffee with less milk and less sugar
same order same time pe counter k dusri taraf (i mean jahan sales boy order le rha hai uske piche) ek table se female voice me ata hai.
sales boy : wah didi same order. sam aur aisha ek dusre ko dekh kr shocked ho jate hai. aisha aur sameer  dono ko spects lage hai but dono ek dusre ko pehchan lete hai.
Aisha : sameer
Sam :Aisha
Salesman : didi ap log ek dusre ko jante ho? Aisha noded. sam aisha ki table k pass jata hai sam glare
Aisha to sales boy : inki coffee meri taraf se hai
Aisha to sam : khade kyu ho baitho aur kisi ne tumhe btaya nahi k iss umer me gussa sehat k liye achcha nahi hota.
Sam saamne wali chair pe baithta hai.
Sam : sirf ek swal…aayi kyun nhi uss din?????
Aisha : pehle tum mere swal ka jawab do…tum pune me kya kr rhe ho
Sam : last month hi retire hua hu….Arjun aur sakshi yahi shift ho gye the pehle….retirement k baad main bhi unke sath aakar rehne lga….
Aisha smiles : kaise ho????? Aur tumhari family?????
Sam : tumhare samne baitha hu…aur Arjun sakshi aur unke bacche hi family hai aur agar tum shadi ki baat kr rhi ho to shadi nhi ki maine…..
Aisha shocked : pr tumhari shadi ka card????
Sam : wo chodo..…ab tum mere swalo ka jawab do…kyun nhi aayi uss din…pure ek hafte maine. Masa aur babasa ne tumhara wait kia….
Flashback
Sam on phone : aisha you know naa….Masa babasa kitni muskil se tumse milne k liye taiyar huye hai….wo to kisi rajgharane ki rajkumari se meri shadi karwana chahte hai….
Aisha : haan sameer…I know….But meri problem bhi to samjho sameer…..Geet meri best friend hai…uski shadi hai….kaise chod kr aa jau uski shadi….Punjab me aur kuch bacha nhi hai sameer mere liye
Sam : aisha…I know…but masa babasa meri shadi ki jidd kr rhe the to mujhe unhe tumhare bare me btana pada…..aur btane k baad wo ekdum se tumse milne ki zidd krne lge…..
Aisha : I know sameer….tum pr bhi shadi ka pressure hai….main kuch karti hu…kal tak main har haal me Mumbai pahuch jaungi…..
Both cut the call…..
Flashback End
Sam : tumne chandigarh se delhi ki flight to li thi…but delhi se Mumbai kyun nhi aayi…..
Aisha : darasal sameer…..uss din geet ko samjha bujha kr shadi se to nikal ayi thi..but mujhe Chandigarh se direct Mumbai ki flight nhi mili…to maine chandigarh se delhi aur delhi se Mumbai jaane ki socha….
Sam : wo main janta hu….pta karwaya tha maine k tumne Chandigarh se to flight pakdi pr delhi se tumne flight nhi pakdi…..
Aisha : Geet k ek relative ne mujhe kuch saaman dia tha jo unke kisi relative ko delhi me dena tha…..iss bare me geet ya uske parents ko bhi isliye nhi pta tha kyunki unhone ekdum se chalte whqt dia tha
Flashback
Aisha Chandigarh se delhi airport pahuchti hai….
Aisha to herself : abhi Mumbai ki flight me 2 hrs hai…main jaldi se jaakar ye saaman de aati hu……
Aisha airport se apna saaman lekar nikalti hai….wo taxi leti hai…Aisha ko kafi pyas lagi hoti hai..taxi driver apni bottle se aisha ko pani peene ko deta hai…..taxi driver aisha ko ek sunsaan raste se le jata hai….Aisha realized k pani me syad kuch mix tha…wo taxi driver ko taxi rokne ko kehti hai…..aisha off lekar Punjab gyi thi to uske pass uss whqt service revolver bhi nhi hoti….jab driver nhi rokta to aisha use rokne k liye use piche ki taraf pull krti hai…jiski wajeh se driver ko taxi rokni padti hai….Aisha driver ko color se pakad kr taxi se bahar nikalti hai…but aisha pr dhere dhere drugs ka asar hone lgta hai….driver ye dekh kr aisha ko dhakka dekar taxi me baitha jata hai aur apni taxi ko aisha k pair k upper se chada kr le jata hai
Flashback end
Aisha : kareeb 2 ghante tak aise hi main sadak pr padi rhi…fir kuch logo ne mujhe hospital me admit karwaya…..Koi janta nhi tha main kaun hu….khun zyda beh jane ki wajeh se mujhe kai dino tak thik se hosh bhi nhi aaya…..baad me pta chala k delhi me kuch taxi drivers ka gang kam kr rha tha jo airport se bahar ki swari ka saaman lut kr unhe maar kr body sunsaan ilake me fek dete the…..syad meri kismat achchi thi k meri jaan bach gyi….
Sam had a guilt expression on his face
Aisha : tum guilt mat karo….geet k parents ne mujhe bataya k tum aaye the mere bare me pta karne……
Flashback
Sam geet k ghar pahuchta hai…geet apne sasural jaa chuki hai….
Geet’s mother : kis se milna hai
Sam : ji actually aisha geet ki shadi attend krne aayi thi….use ek hafte pehle hi Mumbai me office me report krna tha pr wo pahuchi nhi
Geet’s Father : wo to ek hafte pehle hi chali gyi….usne kaha k zaruri kam hai aur wo jaldi khushkhabari degi……
Sam : kya mujhe geet ka number mil skta hai…syad geet ko pta ho k aisha kahaan hai…kyunki wo Chandigarh se delhi to gyi pr delhi se usne Mumbai ki flight nhi pakdi….
Geet’s mother : delhi….arre hogi kisi dost k ghar…..College ki sari padhai usne delhi se hi ki hai……
Sam : uske kisi friend ka number mil jayega kya???? baki main khud pta laga lunga….
Geet’s father : beta aisa to kisi ka number nhi hai hamare pass….uske parents ab iss dunia me rahe nhi….jo unhe kuch pta hota……
Sam : syad geet ko iss bare me kuch pta ho…..aap mujhe geet ka number de dijiye
Geet’s mother : geet ki abhi abhi shadi huyi hai agar ek anjan admi use phone karega to uske sasural wale kya sochenge……
Geet’s father : geet ka number to nhi de skta….pr main geet se baat krke aapko bta dunga….aap apna number de jaiye……
Sam k pass koi option nhi hota…sam apna number de kar chala jata hai……
Sam apne bare me geet ki family ko btata hai k wo ETF officer hai…to Geet k wo relatives jinhone aisha ko saaman dia tha ye soch kr kuch nhi bolte k agar aisha ko kuch ho gya to sam unhe fasa dega police case me…..isliye wo kisi ko nhi batate k unhone aisha ko delhi me dene k liye kuch saaman dia tha
Next day sam k pass geet k father ka call ata hai aur wo batate hai k geet ko bhi iss bare me koi pta nhi hai….Sam wapas Mumbai aata hai…..Masa aur babasa sam ka hi wait kr rhe hote hai
Masa : kahaan hai tumhari aisha…..isliye hum khandani ladki ki baat kr rhe the…ye shehri ladkiyaan…inhe ladke sirf ghumane k liye chahiye hote hai…..shadi k naam se gyab ho gyi….
Sam : masa please
Babasa : sahi keh rhi hai tumhari maa…..warna hume btao kahaan hai aisha….wo Punjab se to chali thi pr ek hafta ho gya Mumbai nhi pahuchi…..itne me to insan agar chahe to chal kr bhi Mumbai aa skta hai
Masa : uske upper kisi ka hath nhi hai to jo chahe kare koi puchne wala nhi hai…Maa baap rahe nhi…to uski jo marzi thi usne kia…..sameer humne tumhari baat suni….ab tum hamari baat suno…..hum tumhara rishta tay kr rhe hai….hume aur kuch nhi sun na hai…..umeed krte hai….k itna kuch hone k baad tum hamara maan rakhoge……
Masa aur babasa rajasthan jaakar sam ka rishta pakka kr dete hai….aur sam ko emotional blackmail krke bula bhi lete hai….but sam engagement se ek din pehle hi ladki ko bta deta hai k wo kisi aur se pyar krta hai aur shadi karega to ussi se wrna nhi….iske baad ladki sam se shadi krne ko mana kr deti hai….masa aur babasa iss baat se sam se kafi naraaz hote hai…..
Babasa : bahut bade ho gye ho tum sameer….apni zindagi k faisle tum khud lene lge ho
Masa : ab tumhe hamari zarurat nhi hai…..jo chahe karo….samaj me tumne hamari naak to katwa di….Pr hum bhi aapko keh rhe hai wo ladki kabhi wapas nhi aayegi…..
Sam : koi baat nhi masa….fir bhi uska intzaar me zindagi bhar krna chahunga
Babasa : jab tumne apna faisla suna hi dia hai….to ab hum kya keh skte hai
Flashback end
Aisha shocked : pr sameer jab kareeb 2 mahine bad main geet k ghar pahuchi to wahaan geet ki maa ne kuch letters mujhe diye jo mere naam se aaye the jinme se ek tha without information gyab rehne ki wajeh se mujhe job se suspend kia gya tha….aur tumhari shadi ka card…..
Sameer : Janta hu…..Masa ne apni aakhiri saanse lene se pehle btaya tha k wo hamare flat me se geet ka address le gyi thi..aur unhone engagement se pehle hi hamari shadi ka card chapwa kr tumhe post kr dia tha….taki agar tum wapas bhi aana chaho to naa aa pao…..unhe mere liye biwi kam aur apne pariwar k liye ek khandani bahu chahiye thi…aur iss lalach me unhe kuch bhi nhi mila…..Tumne department rejoin kyun nhi kia
Aisha : uss pani me drugs itne zyda mile huye the k unhone mere dimag pr sidhe asar kiya…aur uske baad taxi se accident hone ki wajeh se kai dino tak main behoshi me rhi…..mujhe kuch bhi proper yaad nhi tha….jab sab kuch thik hua to NGO walo ne mujhe Punjab pahucha dia….tumhari shadi k card pr ek din pehle ki tarikh thi….to socha join to main kr leti pr tumhe kaise face krti…aur waise bhi main department ke layak rhi nhi thi….
Tabhi café ka manager aata hai….
Manager to aisha : Aisha ji apki delhi ki tickets aa gyi hai….aaj raat ki hi hai
Aisha : okay…maine sara account check kr lia hai….sab thik hai…..
Sam : delhi ????? tum delhi jaa rhi ho????
Aisha : haan….ek chota sa ghar lia hai to baki k din wahi bitane k irade hai…..Main chalti hu..waise to sari packing ho gyi hai fir bhi recheck krna banta hai
Sam : ek akhiri swal ….tumne shadi nhi ki???
Aisha smiles : tumne bhi to nhi ki
Tabhi sales boy aake btata hai k aisha ki taxi aa gyi hai….aisha table se apna saaman uthati hai….unhe pack krti hai….aur side me padi stick uthati hai…aur uss stick ki help chalne me lete huye wo café se bahar chali jati hai..sam shocked…..Manager sam ko shocked dekh kr sab samjh jata hai
Manager to sam : aaj se pehle aisha ko kabhi kisi se itna baat krte nhi dekha…pehli baar hai k usne kisi ko itni derr tak apne pass baithne dia…aap kuch khas hai syad uske liye….aur syad apko pta nhi tha k aisha ji k pair me problem hai….uss accident me aisha k pair me steel ki rod dali gyi…jiske baad wo chal to pati hai pr bina stick ki madad k nhi….aur wo zyda derr kahin khadi bhi nhi reh pati……
Sam aisha ko rok paaye iss se pehle aisha taxi me baith kr jaa chuki hoti hai…..
Arjun shocked : tune pta nhi kia aisha kahaan rehti hai…..aur delhi…..kitne baje ki flight hai uski…hum use abhi jake rokenge….
Sam in a cold voice : ab tak uski flight delhi k liye take off kr chuki hogi….
Sakshi : sam hume to batana chahiye tha naa….
Sam : apni glatiyon ko accept krne me whqt to lgta hai naa sakshi…aisha isliye dobra palat kr nhi aayi kyunki mere zindagi me tufan naa aaye…aur main….hamesha yahi dua krta rha k ek baar zindagi me uss se zarur milu taki use bta saku k usne mere sath kitna galat kia…mujhse zyda use koi pyar nhi kr skta tha…..apni ego ko satisfied kr saku..use niche dikha saku…ek baar bhi nhi socha k uske sath aisa kuch bhi ho skta hai….hamesha lga k wo apni marzi se gyi hai sab chod chad kr…..dhundne ki koshish ki…pr puri tarah se nhi…puri koshish ki hoti to jo aaj pta chala wo bahut pehle hi chal jata……
Arjun : pr sam ab wo mili to kyun jaane dia
Sam : kyun rokta use……hamare rishtey me sirf main hi tha mere masa babasa ko uss se milna tha isliye wo apni friend ki shadi chod kr aa jaye, mujhe shadi ki jaldi thi…uss se pucha hi nhi k wo kya sochti hai….jab use meri sabse zyda zarurat thi aur mujhe uske sath hona chahiye tha tab to main bhi kahin naa kahin masa ki baaton me aa gya k wo shadi nhi krna chahti thi isliye kahin chali gyi….kabhi ye khayal aaya hi nhi k uske sath aisa bhi kuch ho skta hai…aur ab jab usne apni life me meri zarurat khatam kr li hai to use main kahu k chalo life ko ek chance aur dete hai…isliye nhi k mujhe uski parwah hai isliye kyunki main apne guilt se bahar aa saku…khud ko keh saku tab sath nhi dia pr ab to de rha hu….ye thik nhi hota arjun…isliye use jane dia…pta bhi nhi kia…k wo delhi me kahan rehne wali hai….
Flashbacks end
Sam : Mere pass krne k liye kuch tha nhi…aur uss din k baad thoda khamosh hona to banta hai..pr syad kisi ko meri khamoshi psnd nhi aayi….aur ek din sakshi mere pass aayi…
Flashback
Sakshi ek diary aur pen sam ko dete huye
Sakshi : tumhe pta hai sameer….mere ek friend ka heart ka operation hua…main uss se milne gyi thi hospital…..wahaan hospital ki diwar pr ek badi acchi baat likhi huyi thi….agar dil khol lete yaaro k sath to nhi kholna padta aaujaro k sath…..
Sam : sakshi….tum kehna kya chahti ho
Sakshi : ye pen aur diary lo….tumhare mann me jo kuch bhi hai sab iss diary me likho….achcha bura jaisa bhi….aisha k liye guilt hai???? apne upper gussa hai??? jo kuch bhi tumhare dil me chal rha hai naa sab kuch iss kagazo pr utar do…..
Sam : uss se kya hoga…..
Sakshi : nhi pta pr itna hai k tumhe aur tumhare dil ko tasalli milegi….
Flashback end
Sam : bas ye ussi diary k kuch panne hai…jinhe sakshi ne publish karwane ki than li…..aur kitab k taur pr ye aapke saamne hai…..Mujhe use na rokne ka koi pachtava nhi hai…pachtava iss baat ka hai..k jab use mere sath ki zarurat thi…main usse dhund nhi paya……dusro ko unki galatiyon ki kadi se kadi sazaa dilwane ki koshish krte hai hum police wale…pr main apni iss galati ka kya hisab krta…..sazaa mukarar ho gyi……ab zindagi k baki din uss galti ki sazaa katni hai……
Sun ne wale sabhi khud ko emotionally weak feel krte hai….sam apni seat pr aakar baithta hai…issi k sath pura hall taliyon ki awaz se gunj jata hai…book ki inaurgration ka program khatam hone k baad ye decide hota hai k hall me baithe kuch logo k liye sam apne autograph book pr dega….log line me lg kr sam se book pr autograph lete hai…sabse end me ek 10-12 saal ki ladki bhi book pr autograph lene aati hai
Sam (Bina dekhe) : naam
Girl : Aisha Kapoor
Sam ladki ko dekhta hai
Sam : tumhe nhi lgta k romantic novel padhne k liye tum abhi bahut choti ho
Girl : to ye mere liye thodi hai….aur naa hi mera naam aisha kapoor hai….
Sam surprisingly : to fir???????
Girl : ab itni lambi queue me wo itni derr khadi nhi reh skti naa
Sam : kaun????
Girl sam ko apne sath hall me le jati hai jahaan pehle sam ki book ka inaurgration hua tha…wahaan ek kone me ek lady baithi hoti hai..girl sam ko wahaan le jati hai
Girl : ye hai aisha kapoor…ab itni lambi queue thi ye khadi rehti to pair me takleef hoti naa inhe
Sam aur aisha ek dusre ko dekhte hai aisha khadi hoti hai…….
Aisha : kya mujhe ab meri copy writer k autograph k sath milegi
Sam noded….sam book ka cover open krke book k first page pr apne authgraph deta hai….sath hi uski aankh se ek aasu gir jata hai book ki page pr
Voice over : ye kehna muskil tha k ye aasu khushi ka tha k ab uski sazaa k bare usse pta hai jiske liye wo sazaa katna chahta hai ya fir gam ka wo aaj aisha se kuch kehne layak bacha nhi hai….wo apne kiye pr sirf pachta skta hai..aur aisha ki smile ye bta rhi hai use k aisha ko sameer se koi shikayat hi nhi hai….sameer ko ehsas ho rha hai jahaan pyar hota hai wahaan sikhayate nhi hoti aur jahan sikhayate hote hai wahan pyar nhi reh pata…..

Note : 1. Story is mainly Sam k point of view se hai
2. sam ne aisha ko dhundne ki koshish ki…pr use lgta hai k uski koshish puri nhi thi isliye aisha nhi mili
3. Aisha ka saaman taxi driver lekar chala gya tha isliye kisi ko nhi pta tha k aisha kaun hai
4. Aisha k parent nhi the..aur uske sare letter geet ki family hi leti thi…
5. last but not the least….iss umer me raisha ka romance ya shadi to nhi dikha skti thi isliye story ko aise hi bich me chod dia…..



5 comments:

  1. Awesome OS Di
    loved it
    really beautiful.. so heart-touching!
    misunderstandings n circumstances can drive two individuals apart.. so nicely portrayed!!
    This does remind me of the Burning train.. though it's quite different. but that Aisha's legs getting hurt.. that one! :)
    so Sam's diary published as a book.. good!
    apni galati ka pachtava hona bahot zaruri hota he.. aur jise uski galati ka pachtava hop jaye uski galati maaf ho jati he!
    continu writing!!

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  2. nice ending dushman....
    the fact that both havent spoke their hearts in the end and then the cosmic hug was the best thing...realistic touch i must appreciate...:)
    its true sometimes silence speaks louder than words....but thats only worthy when the other person understands it...which had happened in this...
    every has faults, everyone makes mistakes, everyone over thinks....its just about situations which deals with the truffles..
    and you deal with the story....
    awesome...
    thanks for the pm...

    keep writing such stuffs...

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  3. Ooh I had sad ending stories
    Why does this stupid mu's and circumstances make our loved one apart
    Soo heart wrenching and sad story

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  4. Awesome OS
    Loved it
    Loved the way u gave it a realistic touch
    Thanks for the PM

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  5. Awesome..
    I am actually at loss of words.
    Mujhe samajh nehi aa raha kya kahoom!
    Mere ankho mein asu aa gye!
    Senti queen hoom na issliye.
    Anyways I really loved it.

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